Comments for Writer's Exchange https://wex.antioch.edu/ Professional Editing for Writers Who Want to Grow Thu, 12 Aug 2021 23:44:01 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.4.5 Comment on Jedidiah Savard, PsyD by Garett Savard https://wex.antioch.edu/2018/04/02/congratulations-dr-savard#comment-23 Wed, 04 Apr 2018 01:22:01 +0000 http://wex.antioch.edu/?p=15641#comment-23 …’Joie de la vie!’

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Comment on Jedidiah Savard, PsyD by Garett Savard https://wex.antioch.edu/2018/04/02/congratulations-dr-savard#comment-22 Wed, 04 Apr 2018 01:16:25 +0000 http://wex.antioch.edu/?p=15641#comment-22 Son, you have my deepest respect and affectionate congratulations upon summiting this doctoral peak. Gaze a while, then go forth to do good work in the lives of those who seek the ‘jois-de-vive’ awaiting. – the proud Dad

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Comment on Jedidiah Savard, PsyD by Colleen Savard https://wex.antioch.edu/2018/04/02/congratulations-dr-savard#comment-21 Wed, 04 Apr 2018 00:24:18 +0000 http://wex.antioch.edu/?p=15641#comment-21 I am proud of you! Congratulations.

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Comment on Learning to Listen by Meg Tufano https://wex.antioch.edu/2017/06/05/learning-to-listen#comment-20 Wed, 07 Jun 2017 17:12:53 +0000 http://wex.antioch.edu/?p=15407#comment-20 Not only does listening make one’s writing better, but–what I experience as a veteran online teacher–listening makes my teaching more robust.

Interestingly, teaching online requires “listening” far differently than one listens in a land-based class. Listening in “real time” in a land-based class is much harder to achieve, especially of late because EVERYONE is distracted.

But the sense of time pressure seems (paradoxically) to be even more prevalent among twenty-somethings. They are engulfed in a sense of the immediate that is very hard to penetrate, even with the most exciting of lectures. Most do not even “do” email because texting is more satisfying to them (for reasons which escape me).

That sense of the immediate and constant “busy-ness” results in a student who cannot take the time to listen, the sine qua non of learning. How I counter that online is through all the best-practices developed over the last twenty years, but also through the one area where one can catch a student’s attention: I make it personal.

Through one-on-one discussions with me, students are not throwing their ideas out into the sea of people who are half-listening. They are speaking directly to me about ideas that they choose to share with me. They know they are “listened to” (read) because I usually ask questions ‘backatcha’ so they can experience the total attention that is pretty much missing in most modern people’s daily lives.

ALL of the interaction of course is through writing, but the writing of students does seem to improve (sometimes dramatically) when their ideas are taken seriously in online discussions, perhaps because they have the space to listen to their own ideas! [Just FYI, all lectures are canned, and I do not interact with class discussions, so the time I spend teaching is almost entirely in the one-on-one teacher/student area. I also use the Virtual Writing Center for multiple drafts of student writing (for credit).]

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Comment on Revising for Content and Organization by Vanessa Davis https://wex.antioch.edu/2017/02/27/revising-for-content-and-organization#comment-19 Wed, 01 Mar 2017 20:35:23 +0000 http://wex.antioch.edu/?p=15305#comment-19 Thank you for these wonderful resources!

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Comment on Trimming the Fat by Rebecca Davis https://wex.antioch.edu/2016/09/05/trimming-the-fat#comment-18 Sun, 16 Oct 2016 00:37:23 +0000 http://wex.antioch.edu/?p=15171#comment-18 Thank you! I’m so glad to know about the Paramedic Method. I’m another wordy first-drafter; I’m always looking for ways to cut.

A while ago I read a column in Writer’s Digest (since lost) about how you can over-describe.That was a revelation to me, since I’d been beat over the head with the show-don’t-tell method of scene creation. Pick telling detail and leave the rest to the imagination of the reader, this article said. I’ve since come to believe that’s absolutely right.

Here’s to the power of less!

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